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Posted on: Thursday, August 26, 2004

WHAT WORKS
Students like sharing their writing

By Treena Shapiro
Advertiser Education Writer

Joyce Choy's English classes may not be filled with modern-day Shakespeares, but she has seen more students have their works published over the past two years than the typical intermediate school teacher.

Joyce Choy
During her first year teaching at Waipahu Intermediate, four of Choy's students had works published in national journals: two in the 2003 Anthology of Poetry by Young Americans and two in the 2003 Anthology of Short Stories by Young Americans. Another handful will be published in the 2004 editions of the North Carolina-based journals.

Students become enthusiastic about writing when they are sharing their words with different audiences, Choy said. And getting their work published gives students a sense of accomplishment and improves confidence.

For Samantha Valle, now a sophomore at Sacred Hearts Academy, seeing her story "Just Another Friday" published came as a shock. "I was excited and surprised because I didn't know I could do that," she said.

Valle doesn't consider herself a writer — she's more into sports — but she enjoyed being able to express herself freely in Choy's class. "In that class I could be myself," she said.

Waipahu Intermediate School seventh-grader Destin Cardona, front, and classmates take in a lesson in the English class taught by Joyce Choy, who says creative writing allows young people to open their hearts.

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Teaching classes of mixed skill levels, including special education, Choy has found that creative writing helps to even the playing field — with some of her most challenged students among those chosen for publication.

Her secret is establishing rapport when encouraging students to open their hearts in their writing. "I feel that writing is a really intimate thing," she said.

From there, Choy teaches students the basics of writing and gives them the opportunity to create on their own.

It hasn't been easy, though, as Choy points out: "Sometimes it feels like pulling teeth."

That's when she has them share their writing within the classroom, and maybe between different classes. To broaden the audience even more, Choy, an avid letter writer, encourages her students to submit letters to editors.

Choy had students enter the Starbucks Star Poets contest. None of her students won, but "they got really excited because they knew their work was going to be viewed by a different audience," not just their peers.

If you know of a schoolteacher, group or program that has produced great results, help us spotlight them by sending the information to tshapiro@honoluluadvertiser.com or What Works, Honolulu Advertiser, 605 Kapi'olani Blvd., Honolulu, HI 96813. For more details, call 525-8014.

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Lessons learned

Why it's important: Students become enthusiastic about writing when they are sharing their words with different audiences, teacher Joyce Choy said. Getting their work published gives students a sense of accomplishment and improves confidence.

The keys to success: Establish rapport; give students the basic skills, then let them write what they want; limit editing so as not to discourage them.

How to do it: Look for opportunities to get published. It can even be a letter to the editor, in local contests sponsored by any number of groups, or in national publications.