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Posted on: Wednesday, July 27, 2005 Posted on: Wednesday, July 27, 2005

Veterans check FX show for real, unreal

By Bill Keveney
USA Today

"Over There" director Jesse Bocho, left, talks with Erik Palladino between takes. The show is the first to depict a war while fighting goes on.

Photos by Bob Riha Jr. | USA Today

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A group of Iraq war veterans offered a review of FX's "Over There": It's a good show, they say, but a number of details are inaccurate.

Four veterans of Iraq, now assigned to the Army's Santa Monica, Calif., recruiting station, watched the first two episodes.

"It was pretty good, pretty interesting. But there were some misperceptions about the stuff we'd do," said Staff Sgt. Juan Carmona, 26, who hails from Puerto Rico and served in a field artillery unit at the start of the war. He'll watch again, he said.

The soldiers appeared drawn in by the drama of scenes, such as a car bomb at a checkpoint. They took issue with episodic details, such as the movements and shooting practices of the Army unit; the operation of the checkpoint; vehicle movements, especially a truck pulling over so far on the roadside that it risked hitting a mine; the need for more soldiers in a unit; and the delay in informing a soldier's wife of his injury — and by phone, not in person.

All said the soldiers were too clean in the pilot. Producers are adjusting that.

There were laughs, as when a tough-guy soldier talks about "capping" an enemy; and nods of recognition when a sergeant uses a vehicle door mirror to shave, a soldier needs to go to the bathroom during combat, another hopes to become a professional singer, and troops talk of pregnant wives and young children back home.

"It's bringing flashbacks," said Sgt. David Garcia, 23, who worked in water purification in Iraq, when he saw a soldier using bottled water to brush his teeth.

Garcia, a reservist who grew up in Inglewood, Calif., said he could relate to the "don't mess" attitude of Smoke, an "Over There" soldier who grew up in nearby Compton.

Sgt. Robert Mason, 33, of Bennington, Vt., who went to Iraq in 2003, said "Over There" had the most accurate presentation he has seen of troops' uniforms. Troops had the right weapons, too.

But the welder/machinist thought the soldiers were too disorganized. "Our soldiers are trained much better. Things are much more organized."

Cpl. Shelby Dreier, 21, of St. Joseph, Mo., who saw action twice during four months of infantry service in Iraq last year, said the combat focus left out soldiers' other activities, such as construction or just throwing a Frisbee with Iraqi children. But Dreier said he understands the dramatic pull of "blood and killing."

"As a show, it's good," he says. As for the depiction of soldiers' lives, "it's typical."

Co-creator Steven Bochco says "Over There" is trying to capture the spirit of war, not the exact detail. "You have to take license here and there."